Well, I messed up. I’ve had the second draft of the first chapter sitting on this site since When ever I last updated it. Damn. I just pasted the wrong document and went about my day without checking on it. Sorry about that. Allow me to redirect you to the ACTUAL final version of the first chapter. It’s right where the old one was. Aside from that, hopefully I’ll have Chapter 2 up sometime soon. It’s ready to be posted, I just want to give it another pass to check for any dumb mistakes I always make. Um, enjoy I guess.